灵鹊做题网求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章
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求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章
Many people like dogs.But most of them don’t know dogs very much,even a dog keeper.
This summer,I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I read it in two days.
It is an encyclopedia of dogs.It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture.I know interesting things in each story,and I saw different kinds of dogs in each pictures.
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much.Yes,dogs love playing with their owners.They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know?If you give a dog the same toy every day,he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you.But don’t worried,the writer tells us how to play with a dog.He says,your dog should be given only one to play with at a time.For example,you have a ball and a doll; you give the ball to your dog in the morning,and take it away in the evening.The next day,you should give him the doll.This will keep your dog’s attention by not knowing which toy it will get each day,making the toy all the more exciting.
After I read the story,I know the writer love the dog deeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是：作者有多么爱狗……)many people love dogs,but I haven’t seen any people who（如此地了解狗的思想）before.
The book is written by an Australian,and the writer wrote the story for his wife and lovely daughters.But for me,(它有着更深一层的含义).Because this book is from a friend of mine in Australia.She had two dogs,and she loved them.I lived in her house for a week,and I helped them walk the dogs,feed the dogs food.This summer,she sent me the book ‘whisper of wisdom ’.(在扉页上),She wrote a sentence ‘Dear Angel,thanks for the walks and feeding us dinner every night!We hope you like this book about dogs and remember us.Meg & Mickey(the names of the dogs)’
Yes,I will remember them!Though we only lived together for a week,I will remember them forever!Meg and Mickey,you told me that dogs have love,too.You told me dogs are human’s good friends.You told me human and dogs can live happily together.
Dogs are similar to children.They will be happy if you give them a bone or a toy .but if you give them a smile or a stroke,them will be happier.You love them,they love you.
Though I don’t have a dog,I ’ll keep the book in my bookcase .Because (它承载了一段记忆),a memory of lovely dogs.
很多地方不太通顺,
作者有多么爱狗
如此地了解狗的思想
它有着更深一层的含义
在扉页上
它承载了一段记忆--------------------------这几句不太会表达,
Many people like dogs.But most of them don’t know dogs very much,even a dog keeper.
This summer,I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I read it in two days.
It is an encyclopedia of dogs.It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture.I know interesting things in each story,and I saw different kinds of dogs in each pictures.
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much.Yes,dogs love playing with their owners.They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know?If you give a dog the same toy every day,he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you.But don’t worried,the writer tells us how to play with a dog.He says,your dog should be given only one to play with at a time.For example,you have a ball and a doll; you give the ball to your dog in the morning,and take it away in the evening.The next day,you should give him the doll.This will keep your dog’s attention by not knowing which toy it will get each day,making the toy all the more exciting.
After I read the story,I know the writer love the dog deeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是：作者有多么爱狗……)many people love dogs,but I haven’t seen any people who（如此地了解狗的思想）before.
The book is written by an Australian,and the writer wrote the story for his wife and lovely daughters.But for me,(它有着更深一层的含义).Because this book is from a friend of mine in Australia.She had two dogs,and she loved them.I lived in her house for a week,and I helped them walk the dogs,feed the dogs food.This summer,she sent me the book ‘whisper of wisdom ’.(在扉页上),She wrote a sentence ‘Dear Angel,thanks for the walks and feeding us dinner every night!We hope you like this book about dogs and remember us.Meg & Mickey(the names of the dogs)’
Yes,I will remember them!Though we only lived together for a week,I will remember them forever!Meg and Mickey,you told me that dogs have love,too.You told me dogs are human’s good friends.You told me human and dogs can live happily together.
Dogs are similar to children.They will be happy if you give them a bone or a toy .but if you give them a smile or a stroke,them will be happier.You love them,they love you.
Though I don’t have a dog,I ’ll keep the book in my bookcase .Because (它承载了一段记忆),a memory of lovely dogs.
很多地方不太通顺,
作者有多么爱狗
如此地了解狗的思想
它有着更深一层的含义
在扉页上
它承载了一段记忆--------------------------这几句不太会表达,
楼主稍等啊～～～～～奋笔疾书中
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Many people like dogs. But most of them,even a dog keeper, don’t know dogs very much.
调整了一下even...的语序,楼主原来的写法有点儿～中国
This summer, I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I finished reading it in two days.
“完成”阅读～～只用read有点问题
It is an encyclopedia of dogs. It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture. I get to know interesting things in each story, and I saw
改成get to know更好些,强调一种“动态”的了解
different kinds of dogs in each picture.
each后面加单数,大概是误打哦
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much. Yes, dogs love playing with their owners. They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know? If you give a dog the same toy every day, he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you.
But don’t be worried, the writer tells us how to play with a dog. He
两种改法,一个如楼上,一个是don't worry...worried=adj.
says, your dog should be given only one to play with at a time. For example, you have a ball and a doll; you give the ball to your dog in the morning, and take it away in the evening. The next day, you should give him the doll. This will keep your dog’s attention by not letting him know which toy he will get each day, making the all the toys more exciting.
楼主自己看看这几行～有点儿太错了昂～～～
After I read the story, I know the writer love the dog deeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是：作者有多么爱狗……)
改为：I know how deeply the writer love the dog...此为感叹句
many people love dogs, but I haven’t seen any people who（如此地了解狗的思想）before.
改为：but I've never seen anyone who knows the dog so well...
The book is written by an Australian, and the writer wrote the story for his wife and lovely daughters. But for me, (它有着更深一层的含义).
补充改正：But it means more to me...
Because this book came from a friend of mine in Australia. She had
用came from 比be from更有感觉～而且注意是过去时
two dogs, and she loved them. I lived in her house for a week, and I helped them walk the dogs, feed the dogs food. This summer, she sent
（遛狗这词组说的很地道哦）
me the book ‘whisper of wisdom ’. (在扉页上),
翻译：On the head page,
She wrote a sentence ‘Dear Angel, thanks for the walks and feeding
疑问：feed us dinner...难道是楼主你喂他们吃饭?应该是给他们做饭吧?建议改为cook us dinnner
us dinner every night! We hope you like this book about dogs and remember us. Meg & Mickey(the names of the dogs)’
Yes, I will remember them! Though we only lived together for a week, I will remember them forever!Meg and Mickey, you told me that dogs have love, too. You told me dogs are human’s good friends. You told me human and dogs can live happily together.
那个～建议,以上这几行的told都改成showed...不改也行,改了更好
Dogs are similar to children. They will be happy if you give them a bone or a toy .but if you give them a smile or a stroke, them will be happier. You love them, and in return they love you.
这句缺少连词,in return就是反过来～回报你的意思
Though I don’t have a dog, I ’ll keep the book in my bookcase .Because (它承载了一段记忆),
翻译：It carries a piece of memory...（这句最有感觉,我觉得^^）
a memory of lovely dogs.
提一个问题：这个楼主,一会儿管狗狗叫him,一会儿又叫it.这个感情～有变化昂?建议都改成him...我已经改了几个了～～～这样比较有爱意～～
不行采纳答案先55555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555
Many people like dogs. But most of them,even a dog keeper, don’t know dogs very much.
调整了一下even...的语序,楼主原来的写法有点儿～中国
This summer, I received a book called ‘whisper of wisdom ’.And I finished reading it in two days.
“完成”阅读～～只用read有点问题
It is an encyclopedia of dogs. It tells us ‘why dogs do things they do.’
There are many small stories in this book; each story has a beautiful picture. I get to know interesting things in each story, and I saw
改成get to know更好些,强调一种“动态”的了解
different kinds of dogs in each picture.
each后面加单数,大概是误打哦
I like the story‘ the games dogs play’ very much. Yes, dogs love playing with their owners. They will be very happy if you play with him or give him some toys .But do you know? If you give a dog the same toy every day, he will be unhappy and refuse to play with you.
But don’t be worried, the writer tells us how to play with a dog. He
两种改法,一个如楼上,一个是don't worry...worried=adj.
says, your dog should be given only one to play with at a time. For example, you have a ball and a doll; you give the ball to your dog in the morning, and take it away in the evening. The next day, you should give him the doll. This will keep your dog’s attention by not letting him know which toy he will get each day, making the all the toys more exciting.
楼主自己看看这几行～有点儿太错了昂～～～
After I read the story, I know the writer love the dog deeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是：作者有多么爱狗……)
改为：I know how deeply the writer love the dog...此为感叹句
many people love dogs, but I haven’t seen any people who（如此地了解狗的思想）before.
改为：but I've never seen anyone who knows the dog so well...
The book is written by an Australian, and the writer wrote the story for his wife and lovely daughters. But for me, (它有着更深一层的含义).
补充改正：But it means more to me...
Because this book came from a friend of mine in Australia. She had
用came from 比be from更有感觉～而且注意是过去时
two dogs, and she loved them. I lived in her house for a week, and I helped them walk the dogs, feed the dogs food. This summer, she sent
（遛狗这词组说的很地道哦）
me the book ‘whisper of wisdom ’. (在扉页上),
翻译：On the head page,
She wrote a sentence ‘Dear Angel, thanks for the walks and feeding
疑问：feed us dinner...难道是楼主你喂他们吃饭?应该是给他们做饭吧?建议改为cook us dinnner
us dinner every night! We hope you like this book about dogs and remember us. Meg & Mickey(the names of the dogs)’
Yes, I will remember them! Though we only lived together for a week, I will remember them forever!Meg and Mickey, you told me that dogs have love, too. You told me dogs are human’s good friends. You told me human and dogs can live happily together.
那个～建议,以上这几行的told都改成showed...不改也行,改了更好
Dogs are similar to children. They will be happy if you give them a bone or a toy .but if you give them a smile or a stroke, them will be happier. You love them, and in return they love you.
这句缺少连词,in return就是反过来～回报你的意思
Though I don’t have a dog, I ’ll keep the book in my bookcase .Because (它承载了一段记忆),
翻译：It carries a piece of memory...（这句最有感觉,我觉得^^）
a memory of lovely dogs.
提一个问题：这个楼主,一会儿管狗狗叫him,一会儿又叫it.这个感情～有变化昂?建议都改成him...我已经改了几个了～～～这样比较有爱意～～