灵鹊做题网求助信修改
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is LiHua, I am studying at English school. And at present ,I have a trouble in studying . I want have learning Center’ help.
This year my English class is difficult. At first, the teachers speak too quickly, and I can’t understand any spoken English. So it’s difficult for me to understand the teacher. Sometimes I don’t know what I should do next. Second ,I can’t spell some English words. I know vocabulary is important for students to study English. But I always forget a lot of new words. Third , I make mistakes in grammar. I often write wrong sentence. Especially I don’t know how to use commas.
I ‘ll appreciate you if you could help me. You can write a email to me or call me anytime. My email address is LiHua@123com. My phone number is 12345678
Look forward to your reply
Yours
老师谢谢了，25分能得多少分
Li Hua
解题思路： 见下
解题过程：
I am studying at English school.应改为I am studying at an English school。注意冠词。
I have a trouble in studying 改为I have trouble in studying English。注意固定搭配
I want have learning Center’ help.改为I want some help from the learning center.注意want to do.
This year my English class is difficult.改为 It is diffcult for me to learn English now.注意英语说话习惯。
I can’t understand any spoken English. So it’s difficult for me to understand the teacher. 把I can’t understand any spoken English. So 删掉，太啰嗦。
I make mistakes in grammar. I often write wrong sentence.改为I usually make some mistakes in grammar. I often write wrong sentences
I ‘ll appreciate you if you could help me. 改为I ‘ll appreciate it if you could help me注意句型i'llappreciate it if......
如果我打分给你17分，继续加油。祝学习进步。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I am studying at English school.应改为I am studying at an English school。注意冠词。
I have a trouble in studying 改为I have trouble in studying English。注意固定搭配
I want have learning Center’ help.改为I want some help from the learning center.注意want to do.
This year my English class is difficult.改为 It is diffcult for me to learn English now.注意英语说话习惯。
I can’t understand any spoken English. So it’s difficult for me to understand the teacher. 把I can’t understand any spoken English. So 删掉，太啰嗦。
I make mistakes in grammar. I often write wrong sentence.改为I usually make some mistakes in grammar. I often write wrong sentences
I ‘ll appreciate you if you could help me. 改为I ‘ll appreciate it if you could help me注意句型i'llappreciate it if......
如果我打分给你17分，继续加油。祝学习进步。
最终答案：略