自己写的一篇英语作文,求老师修改.

自己写的一篇英语作文,求老师修改.
题目是 How do you treat your parents?
If you feel bored when your parents do something for you? Do you think your parents are detestable or you will hate them sometimes? Nowadays,children and parents talk less and get strange. Some students think it's their parents' fault,they said they've grown up,so parents shouldn't do everytning for them as if they were little children.They think they are in puberty,so parents should understand them.But other students think we should understand our parents,what parents do is good for us,so wo should treat them well.
I think our parents is not easy to support our family,we should understand them,Although we are in puberty,we shouldn't let them feel upset.I know,it's not a easy job to konw them,but,when we make mistakes,they always give us their best love to encourage us.We have no reason to hurt them.Yes,we've grown up,so it's time for us to understand and protect them.After all,we are their children,and they are our parents.
注：puberty 青春期 detestable 烦人的 这几个单词是我查的 不知道用的正确是否 ,求老师修改 在线等待 谢谢~

Parent-child relationships can be very complicated. As a
primary relationship, your parents can be a great source of love, but
also a great source of conflict and tension. To have a harmonious
relationship, you need to treat your parents well. It’s obviously easier
said than done.
Here’s what you need to remember on how to treat your parents.
Be respectful. At all times, you must be respectful to your parents.
This means that you need to be honest in your interactions with your
parents. You also need to remember that although your parents may not
always act in a respectable manner, you have to show gratitude and
appreciate for all the things they do for you. Back talk and being rude
is not acceptable at any age. Though parents do need to hear the hard
truth from you at times, you can always do this in a loving manner. Aim
to love your parents rather than to hurt them.
Be loving. It’s important to show your affection to your parents. Go
ahead and hug and kiss them, no matter how grown up you are. If you
don’t live with your parents anymore, then take the time to call them to
let them know you care. Don’t forget birthdays, holidays and special
occasions. Buy presents for your parents because you want to give back.
Say “I love you” to your parents.

Be appreciative.
No matter what your age and whom you are dealing with, you need to show
your appreciation for the things other people do for you. Of all the
people in the world, it is probably your parents who will do the most
for you. Say thank you for acts of kindness. Let mom know you appreciate
her cooking, and thank dad for working hard to provide for the family.
Be patient. You will certainly have differences in opinion with your
parents. Be patient with them. As you both get older, you’ll have a
wider perspective on life and you must learn to make allowances for your
parents that you may not always give to other people.
Be forgiving. Your parents aren’t perfect though you may grow up
thinking that they are. Forgive them for their shortcomings. Know that
they tried their best with whatever they had. Say sorry and mean it when
you have disagreements with your parents.
Remember that they have your best interests at heart. When you have
disagreements with your parents or you feel that their style of
discipline is off, you need to know that they love you and only want to
keep you safe. No normal parent wants bad things for his child.
Love your parents and try to show affection
whenever you can. You can’t change who your parents are, but you can change
the dynamics of your relationship for the better. Keep this in mind so
you can treat your parents well.