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我要用英文自我介绍希望有高人能帮我改正改正....
I'am Peter,the youngest between the two children in my family.I'am silent,I selldom to talk with other,but I like listioning what are they talking about.I'm helpful and patient.I always help my friend what can I do.(我的意思:只要我能帮我都会帮) They alwys play a trick on me.I just smile.I like watching movie as love story,funny and natural.I always thinking but I don't like it.I can not control my mind.I love free.My dream is buy a beautiful house in good place where have hill,lake and trees around it.
I'am Peter,the youngest between the two children in my family.I'am silent,I selldom to talk with other,but I like listioning what are they talking about.I'm helpful and patient.I always help my friend what can I do.(我的意思:只要我能帮我都会帮) They alwys play a trick on me.I just smile.I like watching movie as love story,funny and natural.I always thinking but I don't like it.I can not control my mind.I love free.My dream is buy a beautiful house in good place where have hill,lake and trees around it.
个人感觉你这个太别扭了,我给小改了一下,更口语化一点
I'am Peter.I am the younger one in my family.I'am silent boy.and comparing talking I would rather listioning to the others silently.I'm also a warm hearted boy,always try to help on my best.They alwys play a trick on me.(这句我没明白你是想说什么,是说你的朋友经常戏弄你,骗你吗.trick这个词基本上是个贬义词) but I just smile it away.
I like watching movies especially those with humour,love or natural.
And I always keep thinking,pondering and musing,and I cannot stop even sometimes I don't really like it.(这句话也没太看明白,是不是想说,我总是不停地思考,而且无法停止.)
I love to be free.(不要用楼上说的freedom,这个词太重了,看过“勇敢的心”和“爱国者”没,那才能叫freedom,举例来说,假如你是个爱尔兰共和军闹独立,那你的愿望才真能叫做freedom)
My dream is have(我个人感觉“拥有”要比“购买”显得不那么功利,要不喜欢可以自己改过来) a beautiful house surrounded by profect view,like on a hill by the lake with woods around.
I'am Peter.I am the younger one in my family.I'am silent boy.and comparing talking I would rather listioning to the others silently.I'm also a warm hearted boy,always try to help on my best.They alwys play a trick on me.(这句我没明白你是想说什么,是说你的朋友经常戏弄你,骗你吗.trick这个词基本上是个贬义词) but I just smile it away.
I like watching movies especially those with humour,love or natural.
And I always keep thinking,pondering and musing,and I cannot stop even sometimes I don't really like it.(这句话也没太看明白,是不是想说,我总是不停地思考,而且无法停止.)
I love to be free.(不要用楼上说的freedom,这个词太重了,看过“勇敢的心”和“爱国者”没,那才能叫freedom,举例来说,假如你是个爱尔兰共和军闹独立,那你的愿望才真能叫做freedom)
My dream is have(我个人感觉“拥有”要比“购买”显得不那么功利,要不喜欢可以自己改过来) a beautiful house surrounded by profect view,like on a hill by the lake with woods around.
我要用英文自我介绍希望有高人能帮我改正改正....
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法错误,怎样改正
求,希望高人能帮我改一下英文句子.
我希望你们可以帮我找到错别字,并改正,
面试自我介绍英语.请帮我看看有没有语法错误,并帮我改正.或者有没有更好的.
帮我检查一下这段英文有没有语法错误,顺便帮我改正一下,
请帮我看下这段英文,哪里有语法错误.英语帝帮我改正下哈.
请帮我看一下英文有没有译错,如果有请帮我改正,
这样做对吗?如果不对希望帮我改正
帮忙改正英文语法我有中文原文及翻译软件给出的英文,希望英文高手能给我把语法改正过来,就是一些词语的顺序而已,因为时间很急
帮我批一下我的英语作文,要指出错误,并且希望改正
帮我改正下语法错误.-