灵鹊做题网求英语大神帮校对这篇短篇英语自我介绍演讲稿有无语法错误或其他,
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求英语大神帮校对这篇短篇英语自我介绍演讲稿有无语法错误或其他,
Hi every one,I am Sophia.Today I have a self-introduction.I am a 13years old girl.I come from Bibo Primary School and I am glad to study in SZ Foreign Language School.Ilike my new school because the school is beautiful,and teachers are funny.I also like my new class and I make lots of friends here.Like Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.Ivy is smart and kind.Teresa is really qute.
I like reading and drawing in my share time,.I love reading science fiction books like《harry potter>and 《the hunger games》.I like drawing and i like art class the best.It's interesting.So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist.Where there is a will,there is a way.I think if I hard enough,I will success
Hi every one,I am Sophia.Today I have a self-introduction.I am a 13years old girl.I come from Bibo Primary School and I am glad to study in SZ Foreign Language School.Ilike my new school because the school is beautiful,and teachers are funny.I also like my new class and I make lots of friends here.Like Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.Ivy is smart and kind.Teresa is really qute.
I like reading and drawing in my share time,.I love reading science fiction books like《harry potter>and 《the hunger games》.I like drawing and i like art class the best.It's interesting.So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist.Where there is a will,there is a way.I think if I hard enough,I will success
Today I have a self-introduction.去掉,不需要
I'm 13 years old.就可以了
I Ilike my new school because it is beautiful,and teachers are very responsible.
I make lots of friends here,such as Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.
Ivy is smart and kind while Teresa is really qute.
share time改为 spare time
书名号去掉,可写成斜体或加下划线
and i like art class the best改为 art class is my favourite class because it is interesting
So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist可改为 therefore,I want to be an artist in the future.
if I hard enough --- If I work hard
I will success --- I will succeed
I'm 13 years old.就可以了
I Ilike my new school because it is beautiful,and teachers are very responsible.
I make lots of friends here,such as Ivy,Teresa,Amily and so on.
Ivy is smart and kind while Teresa is really qute.
share time改为 spare time
书名号去掉,可写成斜体或加下划线
and i like art class the best改为 art class is my favourite class because it is interesting
So,when I grow up,I want to be a artist可改为 therefore,I want to be an artist in the future.
if I hard enough --- If I work hard
I will success --- I will succeed