谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.
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谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.
I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink milk.I watch TV one to three times a week.I sometimes eats hamburgers,and I usually drink orange juice.
I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink milk.I watch TV one to three times a week.I sometimes eats hamburgers,and I usually drink orange juice.
I helps with parents do housework three times a week.→ I help parents do housework three times a week.(不是三单不用加s,help sb do)
I hardly ever drink milk.→ I hardly drink milk.(ever是曾经的意思,不应放在句子里.而且不怎么喝牛奶是一个好习惯吗?)
I sometimes eats hamburgers→ I sometime eats hamburgers(同样的不是三单不用加s)
再问: 原题目是 My good and bad habits 所以我把一些坏习惯也加进去了
再答: 哦原来这样,那么你当中可以加一句过渡句,比如:But,I have bad habits too.这样文思就比较清晰了。
I hardly ever drink milk.→ I hardly drink milk.(ever是曾经的意思,不应放在句子里.而且不怎么喝牛奶是一个好习惯吗?)
I sometimes eats hamburgers→ I sometime eats hamburgers(同样的不是三单不用加s)
再问: 原题目是 My good and bad habits 所以我把一些坏习惯也加进去了
再答: 哦原来这样,那么你当中可以加一句过渡句,比如:But,I have bad habits too.这样文思就比较清晰了。
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