假设你是李华,2011年九月十六日上午你班同学 参观了中国科技馆,请根据以下提示为你校的英 语报写一则短文 1八点坐校车

假设你是李华,2011年九月十六日上午你班同学 参观了中国科技馆,请根据以下提示为你校的英 语报写一则短文 1八点坐校车到中国科技管 2八点半工作人员对科技馆进行大体介绍及参观 注意事项 3八点四十同学们.分组参观科技馆,十一点半 返回 4感受 主要用简单句,容易理解,不用太复杂.
最好给两篇
谢谢学霸!

On May 1,2013,the students in our class paid a visit to China Science and
Technology Museum.
At 8:00,we left for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8:30,a guide introduced it to us briefly and told us what we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later,we were divided into five groups and began our separate visits.All the students were amazed at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by before we knew it.At 11:30,we returned to our school.
This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science and technology.
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【参考例文】
In 2011,during the National Day,the students in our class paid a visit to China Science and Technology Museum.
At 8:00,we left for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8:30,a guide introduced it to us briefly and told us what we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later,we were divided into five groups and began our separate visits.All the students were amazed at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by before we knew it.At 11:30,we returned to our school.
This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science and technology.
【亮点分析】文章行文简洁,脉络清晰,措辞得体符合游记类文体的要求,字数114字符合要求.完全覆盖了要点所列内容,巧妙采用了一些高级句型,一些词语用得很精彩,是一篇很好的作文.
精彩词语：
pay a visit to
leave for
pay attention to
be divided into
separate visits
be amazed at
go by
not only…but also…
broaden
arouse one’s interest in