灵鹊做题网英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.
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英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.
我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.
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Good morning,my dear teachers.
I feel happy and I think I'm lucky for having a chance to study in No.15 Senior High School.Please let me introduce myself.My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School.I‘m easygoing as well as outgoing.I also like English and music.However,I'm poor at spoken English and listenning【listenning是想表达英语听力,请问这样可以么?】.I might make mistakes in my words after,please forgive me.
That's all.Thank you for your listenning.
我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.
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Good morning,my dear teachers.
I feel happy and I think I'm lucky for having a chance to study in No.15 Senior High School.Please let me introduce myself.My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School.I‘m easygoing as well as outgoing.I also like English and music.However,I'm poor at spoken English and listenning【listenning是想表达英语听力,请问这样可以么?】.I might make mistakes in my words after,please forgive me.
That's all.Thank you for your listenning.
根据你写的,我做了些修改：
Good morning, all my teachers/Good morning to all of my teachers.
I am XXX and come from XXXX Middle School. I feel very happy, fortunate, and honored to have the opportunity to become a student at No.15 Senior High School. As a person, I‘m easygoing and outgoing. I also enjoy music. Although English is my favorite subject, I'm still poor at spoken English as well as listenning comprehension. Please forgive me if I have made any mistakes in mybrief introduction of myself. Thank you all for your patience.
希望对你有帮助.
Good morning, all my teachers/Good morning to all of my teachers.
I am XXX and come from XXXX Middle School. I feel very happy, fortunate, and honored to have the opportunity to become a student at No.15 Senior High School. As a person, I‘m easygoing and outgoing. I also enjoy music. Although English is my favorite subject, I'm still poor at spoken English as well as listenning comprehension. Please forgive me if I have made any mistakes in mybrief introduction of myself. Thank you all for your patience.
希望对你有帮助.