灵鹊做题网老师布置的英语作文,有木有高手帮修改一下,在线等
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老师布置的英语作文,有木有高手帮修改一下,在线等
About half month ago,a student of our school was dead nine were
injured in WuYueZhai scenic spot. Facing the unexpected thing. Life is
so fragile. While praying his soul. We have to scan the value of life
again.
It is said that about 16,000 die in school every year in China.The
worst accidents come from food poisoning,traffic and outing security
issue may sound truism,but when it comes to the campus security,we
have to table it seriously.
There are more hot days in ShiJiaZhuang,the public swimming pool has
become a powered place,like Taiping River. A pool of blue and lovely
watar,but there is also potential danger,when we launched. It is
ncessary to strengthen self-protection.
Nearly every day. It is reports that stealing and mugging surround
us. In this case,we should strengthen our security awareness. Do not go
out done at night and don't go sightseeing without Wulijia's
permission. Finally,I hope everyone has a good summer. That's all.Thank
you.
About half month ago,a student of our school was dead nine were
injured in WuYueZhai scenic spot. Facing the unexpected thing. Life is
so fragile. While praying his soul. We have to scan the value of life
again.
It is said that about 16,000 die in school every year in China.The
worst accidents come from food poisoning,traffic and outing security
issue may sound truism,but when it comes to the campus security,we
have to table it seriously.
There are more hot days in ShiJiaZhuang,the public swimming pool has
become a powered place,like Taiping River. A pool of blue and lovely
watar,but there is also potential danger,when we launched. It is
ncessary to strengthen self-protection.
Nearly every day. It is reports that stealing and mugging surround
us. In this case,we should strengthen our security awareness. Do not go
out done at night and don't go sightseeing without Wulijia's
permission. Finally,I hope everyone has a good summer. That's all.Thank
you.
很高兴帮你回答这个问题,因为你的有些句子我也不太懂,所以有些地方改写了一下.我语法也一般,所以肯定有些错误,就当参考吧.
About half month ago,a student in our school was dead, and there were also nine students got hurt in WuYueZhai scenic spot. Life is so fragile when encountering some accidents. While praying for（pray for固定搭配 为.祈祷） his soul. We have to estimate（estimate估计评估,原来的scan感觉不太好,一般是扫描的意思） the value of life again.
I'm so sorry（我很遗憾） that there are about 16000 students died on the campus every year .The worst accidents coming from food poisoning,traffic accidents and safety problems on hiking（远足的安全问题）. These may sound out of date（out of date 过时的）,but when it happens on our campus（on our campus 固定搭配,在校园里）, we have to talk about it seriously.
There are more hot days in ShiJiaZhuang so that the public swimming pool has become a popular place（原来用的powerd place我不知道什么意思,应该是表示受欢迎吧,所以是popular place） such as Taiping River. Although it seems peaceful on the surface of water, there are also some potential dangers inside. So, when we get ready for（get ready for 做好准备干.） swimming, to promote the awareness of self-pretection （awareness of self-pretection 安全意识）is necessary. Almost every day（几乎每一天）. We can hear some reports about steal and murder（介词后接动词时加ing变动名词,但是steal和murder本身就可以作名词）, In these case,we should strengthen our security awareness either. Do not go outside alone at night without parents' permission. Finally,I hope that everyone can have a good summer. That's all.Thank you.
About half month ago,a student in our school was dead, and there were also nine students got hurt in WuYueZhai scenic spot. Life is so fragile when encountering some accidents. While praying for（pray for固定搭配 为.祈祷） his soul. We have to estimate（estimate估计评估,原来的scan感觉不太好,一般是扫描的意思） the value of life again.
I'm so sorry（我很遗憾） that there are about 16000 students died on the campus every year .The worst accidents coming from food poisoning,traffic accidents and safety problems on hiking（远足的安全问题）. These may sound out of date（out of date 过时的）,but when it happens on our campus（on our campus 固定搭配,在校园里）, we have to talk about it seriously.
There are more hot days in ShiJiaZhuang so that the public swimming pool has become a popular place（原来用的powerd place我不知道什么意思,应该是表示受欢迎吧,所以是popular place） such as Taiping River. Although it seems peaceful on the surface of water, there are also some potential dangers inside. So, when we get ready for（get ready for 做好准备干.） swimming, to promote the awareness of self-pretection （awareness of self-pretection 安全意识）is necessary. Almost every day（几乎每一天）. We can hear some reports about steal and murder（介词后接动词时加ing变动名词,但是steal和murder本身就可以作名词）, In these case,we should strengthen our security awareness either. Do not go outside alone at night without parents' permission. Finally,I hope that everyone can have a good summer. That's all.Thank you.