灵鹊做题网请老师指导写法和语法谢谢3
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解题思路： 你所写的范文还是很不错的， 只是段落层次有点乱，语言上有点罗嗦。 对于这篇文章应该从三段来写， 一般英语作文大多数都是遵循三部曲的即三个段落的写法。第一段整体介绍English Bridge， 即所给汉语提示的前两点; 第二段写该报纸的优点， 即汉语提示的3,4,5点； 最后一段写个人感受。下面给提提供一篇范文供参考，希望会对你有所帮助。 English Bridge is a widely known English newspaper featuring a lot of columns. Among them, Crosswords, Cultural Exchange and writing gardens stand out as the students favorites. The newspaper is published in a modern style with original materials, providing general readers with abundant information as well as vigorous entertai
解题过程：
你所写的范文还是很不错的， 只是段落层次有点乱，语言上有点罗嗦。
对于这篇文章应该从三段来写， 一般英语作文大多数都是遵循三部曲的即三个段落的写法。第一段整体介绍English Bridge， 即所给汉语提示的前两点; 第二段写该报纸的优点， 即汉语提示的3,4,5点； 最后一段写个人感受。下面给提提供一篇范文供参考，希望会对你有所帮助。
English Bridge is a widely known English newspaper featuring a lot of columns. Among them, Crosswords, Cultural Exchange and writing gardens stand out as the students favorites. The newspaper is published in a modern style with original materials, providing general readers with abundant information as well as vigorous entertainment.
Besides, the exercises in the newspaper go hand in hand with the textbooks with timely supporting exercises. The students especially benefit a lot from the column "Writing Gardens". Furthermore, the wonderful design of the newspaper's outlook proves to be a great success with its attractive pictures and texts.
Thanks to the newspaper, my English has improved a lot by reading the articles and doing the exercises. The paper can make your English better as long as you keep reading it.
解题过程：
你所写的范文还是很不错的， 只是段落层次有点乱，语言上有点罗嗦。
对于这篇文章应该从三段来写， 一般英语作文大多数都是遵循三部曲的即三个段落的写法。第一段整体介绍English Bridge， 即所给汉语提示的前两点; 第二段写该报纸的优点， 即汉语提示的3,4,5点； 最后一段写个人感受。下面给提提供一篇范文供参考，希望会对你有所帮助。
English Bridge is a widely known English newspaper featuring a lot of columns. Among them, Crosswords, Cultural Exchange and writing gardens stand out as the students favorites. The newspaper is published in a modern style with original materials, providing general readers with abundant information as well as vigorous entertainment.
Besides, the exercises in the newspaper go hand in hand with the textbooks with timely supporting exercises. The students especially benefit a lot from the column "Writing Gardens". Furthermore, the wonderful design of the newspaper's outlook proves to be a great success with its attractive pictures and texts.
Thanks to the newspaper, my English has improved a lot by reading the articles and doing the exercises. The paper can make your English better as long as you keep reading it.