英语高手来修改语法!If I have super powers,I will use these capabiliti

英语高手来修改语法!
If I have super powers,I will use these capabilities to do the good things.
If I could fly and have a strong body,I will rush to the place at the first time,to help those people who will die.If a fire accident happened,I will arrive there and take those people to safe place.When the reporter ask who am I,I won't tell them and leave there quietly.
If I could talk to animals,I will talk with them a lot,then I will understand animals'opinions.After that,I will invoke all the people in the world DO NOT HURT ANIMAIS,THEY ARE OUR FRIENDS.It is really a great thing,isn't it?
If I could make nice and delicious food,I will give them to poor people.Because they really need a good big meal,if they haven't a strong body,how can they work hard?When they say thank you to me,I will smile to them and tell them it is my duty.
If I have many more super powers,of course I will use them to do many more good things.Although it is a nice dream,I will do as I said if I really have these super powers.Okay,just let this dream keeping forever.
翻译：如果我有超能力,我会用这些能力去做好事.
如果我能飞而且还拥有一个强壮的身体.我会在第一时间去冲到现场去救那些快死的人.如果有火灾发生,我会赶到那里再将人们带到安全地带.当记者问我我是谁,我只会悄悄的离开那里.
如果我可以与动物们说话,我会与他们痛快地聊一场,当我了解了动物的心理后,我就会告诉世界上的人们,不要伤害动物,他们是我们的朋友.这真的是一件伟大的事,
如果我能变出美食,我会帮助穷人.因为他们真的需要好好的享受一顿大餐.如果他们没有一个强壮的身体,他们怎么能好好工作呢?当他们向我说谢谢时,我会微笑并告诉他们这是我的责任.
如果我有更多更多的超能力,我当然会用它们去做更多更多的好事.虽然这是个美好的梦,但是如果以后我真的有这些超能力的话我就会去做我的承诺.好吧,就让这个梦永不破碎吧.
多提一些.我不会吝啬分的.而且还要将出为什么的原因.

我觉得你的想法很好,有些句子也写得不错.下面是我的修改和说明,希望对你有帮助
If I have super powers, I will use these capabilities to do the good things.
(If I had exceptional power, I would use it for the good of the people.)
评：super powers是超级大国的意思
做好事不会写成do the good things,一般是do the good deeds
语法上,这篇文章的语气应该用虚拟语气,因为你实际上并没有超能力,你只是谈论假如你有的话会怎样.你有些地方的时态没用对,需要改正,下面如果碰到同样的问题就直接改了.
If I could fly and have a strong body, I will rush to the place at the first time,to help those people who will die.If a fire accident happened, I will arrive there and take those people to safe place.When the reporter ask who am I,I won't tell them and leave there quietly.
(If I could fly and had a strong body, I would rush to save dying people. If a fire broke out, I would arrive at the scene in no time, and take people who are trapped to safety. Should the reporter ask who I am, I would leave quietly without telling them my name.)
评：rush已经包含第一时间的意思了,不用另外说一遍
要死的人dying people
（火灾）爆发break out
（火灾）现场scene,用there不够准确
受困的人people who are trapped,仅仅说people也不够准确
When the reporter ask who am I 语序不正确
If I could talk to animals,I will talk with them a lot,then I will understand animals'opinions.After that,I will invoke all the people in the world DO NOT HURT ANIMAIS,THEY ARE OUR FRIENDS.It is really a great thing,isn't it?
(If I could talk to animals, I would talk with them a lot to understand what they think. Then I'd translate their words to human beings, so that we could know our animal friends better, and would not do things to harm them. This would really be a great thing, right?)
评：动物所想what they think
和动物相对的是人类,这时候一般不说people in the world,而说human beings
做伤害他们的事情do things to harm them,harm除了肉体上的伤害,还有其它方面的危害,用在这里比hurt好
If I could make nice and delicious food,I will give them to poor people.Because they really need a good big meal,if they haven't a strong body,how can they work hard?When they say thank you to me,I will smile to them and tell them it is my duty.
(If I could make nice and delicious food, I would give them to poor people in need. In order to work hard, their bodies have to be strong. When they thank me, I would smile to them, and tell them it is my duty.)
评：有需要的穷苦人poor people in need
为了能够辛勤工作In order to work hard
I would smile to them, and tell them it is my duty.你这句写得不错
If I have many more super powers,of course I will use them to do many more good things.Although it is a nice dream,I will do as I said if I really have these super powers.Okay,just let this dream keeping forever.
(If I had other kinds of exceptional power, I would surely use them to do many more good deeds. Although it is only a nice dream, I would definetely do as I promised if it came true. )
评：surely,definetely肯定地
梦想成真dream come true
最后一句你可以考虑删掉
ps.楼上同学的翻译很生动啊