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请您帮我看看我的句子是否写的有问题行吗.
Several days ago,I’vesent you an email to ask about the MFA programme,and I feel anxious whether you cannot receive up messagebecause mailing box system or the electric network reason.
I am writing to tell youthat I’ve sent an email to the course leaderto express how eager I am to join the programme.In the former email I haveasked three questions and I still wonder about two of them.
请您帮我看看我的句子是否写的有问题行吗.
I feel anxious whether you receive up message because of mailing box system or the electric network.
whether已经有是不是,是否的意思,没必要can't
because和reason重复,because引导句子,because of加名词.