灵鹊做题网这段话有没有错误?有的话要怎么改?（请看补充）
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这段话有没有错误?有的话要怎么改?（请看补充）
This summer holiday I am going to go running after get up at six o'clock.I'll run for a quarter.After that,I'll play computer games,surf the Internet and listen to music.At half past ten,I'll have lunch with my family .After lunch,I'll take a walk with my homework two hours.At four o'clock,I'll have a rest .At ten past five ,I'll have dinner with my family.After dinner,we'll watch TV.At eight o'clock,I'll go to bed.
这是我第一次写英语作文,不知道写的怎么样,想想应该会有一些错误吧,有的话给我指出来,帮我改一下把,
This summer holiday I am going to go running after get up at six o'clock.I'll run for a quarter.After that,I'll play computer games,surf the Internet and listen to music.At half past ten,I'll have lunch with my family .After lunch,I'll take a walk with my homework two hours.At four o'clock,I'll have a rest .At ten past five ,I'll have dinner with my family.After dinner,we'll watch TV.At eight o'clock,I'll go to bed.
这是我第一次写英语作文,不知道写的怎么样,想想应该会有一些错误吧,有的话给我指出来,帮我改一下把,
这段话没有错误