灵鹊做题网谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文
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谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文
要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,
还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。
要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹,还有旅游的益处就行了,
还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。能开阔眼界什么的。这个没写具体。
楼上语法错误不下二十个,虽然很浪费时间,但我还是改错好了,不然楼主用了就惨了：
I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to that of Beijing!
I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to that of Beijing!