灵鹊做题网谁帮我看看有没有什么语法错误?
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：灵鹊做题网作业帮 分类：英语作业 时间：2024/05/15 01:51:36
谁帮我看看有没有什么语法错误?
Shenzhen is a coast city,there are many fine park,such as zhongshan park,lixiang park.The park everymorning have losts of old man,.shenzhen is also famous for is a tourist destination such as East OCT, Splendid China Folk Village, Window of the World, Happy Valley, Shenzhen has many dielious food,in here you can taste food from all over the world..These day ,you also can buy lots of dielious food for your friend
Shenzhen have many event,These events will help you better understand Shenzhen
谢各位达人帮忙看看
如果有错，请帮忙改改
Shenzhen is a coast city,there are many fine park,such as zhongshan park,lixiang park.The park everymorning have losts of old man,.shenzhen is also famous for is a tourist destination such as East OCT, Splendid China Folk Village, Window of the World, Happy Valley, Shenzhen has many dielious food,in here you can taste food from all over the world..These day ,you also can buy lots of dielious food for your friend
Shenzhen have many event,These events will help you better understand Shenzhen
谢各位达人帮忙看看
如果有错，请帮忙改改
尽我所能了……我直接给你写了
such as zhongshan park nd lixiang park.
接下来语序有点问题
every morning(不要连着写,没有这个词） there are lots of old man.
Shenzhen is also famous for some sights such asEast OCT ,Splendid China Folk Village,...
There are many delicious foods in shenzhen(不能用have）,here you can taste food all over the world(没有from）
Nowadays,you also can buy your friend lots of delicious（拼写错误,上面也是）food(buy sb.sth)
最后一段读不通,感觉每对
The history of shenzhen will help you to understand the city better.
祝你英语水平步步高!把机会留给我哦~
such as zhongshan park nd lixiang park.
接下来语序有点问题
every morning(不要连着写,没有这个词） there are lots of old man.
Shenzhen is also famous for some sights such asEast OCT ,Splendid China Folk Village,...
There are many delicious foods in shenzhen(不能用have）,here you can taste food all over the world(没有from）
Nowadays,you also can buy your friend lots of delicious（拼写错误,上面也是）food(buy sb.sth)
最后一段读不通,感觉每对
The history of shenzhen will help you to understand the city better.
祝你英语水平步步高!把机会留给我哦~