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A happy holiday
Last saturday,my family spent happy time.
My parents and I took the bus to our hometown to visit my grandparents and my uncle.I had been to hometown when I am 6.So I did not remember there.At noon,we got there.You can't imgaine how large change there were!The village was so beautiful that I forgot to walk.(未完)
After lunch,we visited the folkway museum of hometown.My father was interested in that old things.And at evening,we went to movies at village.
Sunday,we came back home by car.
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我写了篇作文,请大家修改.
A happy holiday
Last saturday,my family spent happy time.
My parents and I took the bus to our hometown to visit my grandparents and my uncle.I had been to hometown when I am 6.So I did not remember there.At noon,we got there.You can't imgaine how large change there were!The village was so beautiful that I forgot to walk.(未完)
After lunch,we visited the folkway museum of hometown.My father was interested in that old things.And at evening,we went to movies at village.
Sunday,we came back home by car.
希望标出改动地方。
A happy holiday
Last saturday,my family spent a happy time together.
My parents and I took the bus to our hometown to visit my grandparents and my uncle.I had been to hometown when I am 6.It was such a long time ago so I counld not remember there.At noon,we arrived there.You couldn't imgaine what tremendous changes it had taken place!The village was so beautiful that I forgot to walk.
Last saturday,my family spent a happy time together.
My parents and I took the bus to our hometown to visit my grandparents and my uncle.I had been to hometown when I am 6.It was such a long time ago so I counld not remember there.At noon,we arrived there.You couldn't imgaine what tremendous changes it had taken place!The village was so beautiful that I forgot to walk.
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