灵鹊做题网跪求哪位英语高手能帮我该以提短语改错,急
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跪求哪位英语高手能帮我该以提短语改错,急
All of us know the old saying ''Practice make perfect.''It tell us unless we want to realize our aim,we should practice,and one day we will make it.It's easy to understand.Once I wanted to learn swimming.At first I found difficult to control my body.I just sank into the water.I feel very frightened.Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed.I went to the swimming pool everyday ,learned from them and practiced.A day,when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool ,I sudden found that I could swim.How exciting I was !Now I can swim better than before.
All of us know the old saying ''Practice make perfect.''It tell us unless we want to realize our aim,we should practice,and one day we will make it.It's easy to understand.Once I wanted to learn swimming.At first I found difficult to control my body.I just sank into the water.I feel very frightened.Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed.I went to the swimming pool everyday ,learned from them and practiced.A day,when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool ,I sudden found that I could swim.How exciting I was !Now I can swim better than before.
make改为 makes、tell改为tells、unless改为if、found后加it、feel改为felt、them改为it、succeed改为succes、A改为one、sudden改为suddenly、exciting改为excited、