灵鹊做题网大家看看我写的英语作文,
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大家看看我写的英语作文,
声明：我写英语作文不是很好,错误可能比较多,希望大家帮我改进,找出错误.
Every has own difficulty,we should face to them.
Maybe you are deaf or have other problems,don't give up.If god had closed the door,he will open another window.Believe yourself and you will find a new way to the success.
海伦凯特,a English writer.She can't see anything when she is young.But she never gives up the life .she loves to write.She thinks writing can give her interesting and the hope of life .She keeps on writing and became a famous writer in the end.
The road is yours,other people couldn't walk instead of you.So you should walk on the road,which is yours.
From now on,smile to every thing,you will find the joy of life.
声明：我写英语作文不是很好,错误可能比较多,希望大家帮我改进,找出错误.
Every has own difficulty,we should face to them.
Maybe you are deaf or have other problems,don't give up.If god had closed the door,he will open another window.Believe yourself and you will find a new way to the success.
海伦凯特,a English writer.She can't see anything when she is young.But she never gives up the life .she loves to write.She thinks writing can give her interesting and the hope of life .She keeps on writing and became a famous writer in the end.
The road is yours,other people couldn't walk instead of you.So you should walk on the road,which is yours.
From now on,smile to every thing,you will find the joy of life.
文章立意不错!不过句子比较生硬,这或许与你的单词量有关,比如第一句改为everyone has his own shortage 更好些.平时多背单词,背一些简单的小文章,对你会有很大提高,加油!