灵鹊做题网英语里写信时可不可以用BY THE WAY?请帮我看一下这样回信是否可以.
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英语里写信时可不可以用BY THE WAY?请帮我看一下这样回信是否可以.
Dear XXX,
I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday.The result will be announced in 15 days,and it will be sent to you.
However,I think the score will be higher if I have enough time to prepare,also,it is my first time to take the TOEFL test.
Thank you for waiting for it.I am really grateful that you can give me the chance.:)
By the way,could you please tell me how soon I will be able to hear back from the school?I am really looking forward to being accepted by your school.
Best regards,
XXX
这样可以吗?会不会有哪里显得有点不礼貌呢?另外第一句的I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday要不要改成I took it呢?
Dear XXX,
I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday.The result will be announced in 15 days,and it will be sent to you.
However,I think the score will be higher if I have enough time to prepare,also,it is my first time to take the TOEFL test.
Thank you for waiting for it.I am really grateful that you can give me the chance.:)
By the way,could you please tell me how soon I will be able to hear back from the school?I am really looking forward to being accepted by your school.
Best regards,
XXX
这样可以吗?会不会有哪里显得有点不礼貌呢?另外第一句的I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday要不要改成I took it呢?
I've taken the TOEFL yesterday and the result will be announced in 15 days,I will send it to you as soon as I get it.
It is my first time to take such test and I believe that I could get better grades if I had more time to prepare for it.Thanks for your waiting.I am really appreciate that you can give me the chance.
At last,would you mind telling me when could I get the reply I sincerely hope that i could be admitted by your school.
Best regards,
XXX
第一个不用改,因为你要强调的的是你已经参加完考试了,already可以不用了.我大概帮你该了下~你原来说的有些话我觉得不太地道
再问： 那个,,托福的成绩是ETS直接发给学校的
再答： 恩，那就改成你原来写的那样的吧~
再问： ..而且你改的说是不地道的那几句,都是我在美国的阿姨用英语给我发邮件的时候直接发给我的原句呀,,
再答： 我的意思不是之前的说错了，我就是觉得既然发给学校是不是应该说的委婉客气一点，你写的这个也完全可以的~仅仅是我个人意见
It is my first time to take such test and I believe that I could get better grades if I had more time to prepare for it.Thanks for your waiting.I am really appreciate that you can give me the chance.
At last,would you mind telling me when could I get the reply I sincerely hope that i could be admitted by your school.
Best regards,
XXX
第一个不用改,因为你要强调的的是你已经参加完考试了,already可以不用了.我大概帮你该了下~你原来说的有些话我觉得不太地道
再问： 那个,,托福的成绩是ETS直接发给学校的
再答： 恩，那就改成你原来写的那样的吧~
再问： ..而且你改的说是不地道的那几句,都是我在美国的阿姨用英语给我发邮件的时候直接发给我的原句呀,,
再答： 我的意思不是之前的说错了，我就是觉得既然发给学校是不是应该说的委婉客气一点，你写的这个也完全可以的~仅仅是我个人意见
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