灵鹊做题网英语：帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.
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英语：帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.
When you see this post, perhaps you do not love me, maybe she has occupied most of your life.
Thank you for staying with me a year. Although this result isn’t what I want
Darling,please allow me to call you like this
It seems impossible.
The end of the story, the best to wish you
When you see this post, perhaps you do not love me, maybe she has occupied most of your life.
Thank you for staying with me a year. Although this result isn’t what I want
Darling,please allow me to call you like this
It seems impossible.
The end of the story, the best to wish you
呃,这位仁兄,真是一塌糊涂啊,你最好发个中文版本让我给你翻译好了,真不知道你在说什么,句子虽然语法有一些是对的,但是上下文根本无关,东一榔头西一棒槌,简直是...我都看不下去了!
如果坚持要这一版,下面是语法部分的修改,内容上没法改,太乱了
When you see this post,perhaps you do not love me,maybe she has occupied most of your life.不能用逗号连接两个句子,maybe前改成句号
Thank you for staying with me a year.Although this result isn’t what I want（加逗号）
Darling,please allow（allowing） me to call you like this（整个做seems 的主语）It （it去掉）seems impossible.
The end of the story（没谓语,变成everything is over 更爽更直接）,the best to wish you （改成Best wishes to you!做整个句子,不要和前面的连接起来）
呼呼!
累死我鸟!
如果坚持要这一版,下面是语法部分的修改,内容上没法改,太乱了
When you see this post,perhaps you do not love me,maybe she has occupied most of your life.不能用逗号连接两个句子,maybe前改成句号
Thank you for staying with me a year.Although this result isn’t what I want（加逗号）
Darling,please allow（allowing） me to call you like this（整个做seems 的主语）It （it去掉）seems impossible.
The end of the story（没谓语,变成everything is over 更爽更直接）,the best to wish you （改成Best wishes to you!做整个句子,不要和前面的连接起来）
呼呼!
累死我鸟!
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