灵鹊做题网谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)
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谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)
Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me with the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because l'm their only son.So l think not only my friends but also my parents are the important people in my heart.And l believe that love will arrive every corner in the world in the near future.
请问3楼的,我这个在中考可以拿几分?
中考是18分.....大家都给打下分
Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me with the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because l'm their only son.So l think not only my friends but also my parents are the important people in my heart.And l believe that love will arrive every corner in the world in the near future.
请问3楼的,我这个在中考可以拿几分?
中考是18分.....大家都给打下分
文章写得好,鼓励!
但是有拼写错误：第二排的amang应该是among.
第四排的with the trouble多余了,删掉就可以了.
第五句想表达的意思是：因为我是他们唯一的儿子.Yes?那么翻译错了.应该是：Because I'm
their son the only.
最后的near future想说是：不久的将来.Yes?把near删去,在future 后面加soon就可以了.
保留著作权,至于你说什么我不干涉,只帮你看看有没有错误就行.
（中考作文是15分的,你写这样可以得个12分,如果书写好的话13分的样子吧.但有的老师是不看书写的!所以应该是12分左右）
但是有拼写错误：第二排的amang应该是among.
第四排的with the trouble多余了,删掉就可以了.
第五句想表达的意思是：因为我是他们唯一的儿子.Yes?那么翻译错了.应该是：Because I'm
their son the only.
最后的near future想说是：不久的将来.Yes?把near删去,在future 后面加soon就可以了.
保留著作权,至于你说什么我不干涉,只帮你看看有没有错误就行.
（中考作文是15分的,你写这样可以得个12分,如果书写好的话13分的样子吧.但有的老师是不看书写的!所以应该是12分左右）