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帮忙看看下面这短文有没有什么错误,不要挑太刁钻的
Dear XXX,I am XXXX.I was so regretful about my employment,cause i didn't make it well for my nervous.Please give me the chance to make self introduction again.
My name is XXX,a student in XXXU.My major is sience of electronic.I am really good at Physics and math,and I also make achievement in this two subjects.I think I am a responsible and patient people,who can get along well with others.
As has been metion above,I'm eager for this work.Last but not least,this job,what really atracts me is the educational experience,not the money.I think it makes no difference to me that whether this job is well-paid or not and i just want this experience.
I hope you can give me the chance to make it!Thank you!
Dear XXX,I am XXXX.I was so regretful about my employment,cause i didn't make it well for my nervous.Please give me the chance to make self introduction again.
My name is XXX,a student in XXXU.My major is sience of electronic.I am really good at Physics and math,and I also make achievement in this two subjects.I think I am a responsible and patient people,who can get along well with others.
As has been metion above,I'm eager for this work.Last but not least,this job,what really atracts me is the educational experience,not the money.I think it makes no difference to me that whether this job is well-paid or not and i just want this experience.
I hope you can give me the chance to make it!Thank you!
第一行cause是名词,这里应该是连接词,左上应该有个省文撇；make it well for my nervous中nervous应该是名词形式,应改为nervousness.As has been metion above中metion应为被动,加ed；this job,what really atracts me is the educational experience,not the money.这句少谓语,可以改为what really attracts me in this job is the educational experience,not the money.