灵鹊做题网帮忙看下这段英文有没有错
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帮忙看下这段英文有没有错
Hello everyone,I'm very glad to intruoduce myself here.
My name is ZY.I am 18 now.And I'm in class one of Digital Media Art.I have many hobbies just like writing poem,singing,handwriting,playing computer games and so on.And because of this,I do like my major.So I passed the university entrence examination successfully and enrolled in Beijing Forestry University finally.
In the university life,I'm going to study hard.Fore years later,I hope I can invent a computer game by myself.I think everyone should have a dream and work hard towards the goal.
This term we have talked about many topics from our class.My favourite topic is the animal world in Unit 5 because I like the small animals very much.My family have a lovely dog that I treat as my friend.I think human beings and animals are equal.But there are many cases that people maltreat animals or kill animals unequally taking place around our life.They're so cruel!Every year there are some kinds of animals becoming extinct.It's so terrible!So I hope everyone could love animals,treat them as friends.Only in this way can we live in a harmonious world.
Hello everyone,I'm very glad to intruoduce myself here.
My name is ZY.I am 18 now.And I'm in class one of Digital Media Art.I have many hobbies just like writing poem,singing,handwriting,playing computer games and so on.And because of this,I do like my major.So I passed the university entrence examination successfully and enrolled in Beijing Forestry University finally.
In the university life,I'm going to study hard.Fore years later,I hope I can invent a computer game by myself.I think everyone should have a dream and work hard towards the goal.
This term we have talked about many topics from our class.My favourite topic is the animal world in Unit 5 because I like the small animals very much.My family have a lovely dog that I treat as my friend.I think human beings and animals are equal.But there are many cases that people maltreat animals or kill animals unequally taking place around our life.They're so cruel!Every year there are some kinds of animals becoming extinct.It's so terrible!So I hope everyone could love animals,treat them as friends.Only in this way can we live in a harmonious world.
Class One ,writing poemS,During four-year university life,Four years later,in our classes,My family has,unequally去掉,