灵鹊做题网作文求批改
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题目就是说我们学校新开设了一个栏目叫ENGLISH WRITING 请写篇文章来介绍它，该栏目主要是方便学生发表作文，促进作文交流 提高作文水平。要包括以下内容 开设目的 栏目优势：教师在线指导等 作文要求：内容贴近学生生活 优秀作文的鼓励办法 邀请大家参与 我的：Welcome to the Column"English Writing"！ There is a new column,which is set up for the students to post English articles.Conecting with others in there,can you omprove you English writing skill. In our column,you can ask the teachers for guidance online.In addition,we have prize for the good writers to encourage others.There are many things,as phone,for the writers to choice.We need the articles of students' life.Is the prize prepared for you? Maybe you are "the king in writing" 我们这满分25 这个能多少分 然后求点评
解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下 优点：语义结构合理，叙述有层次 缺点：个别句子需修改，注意用词 Welcome to the Column 加of "English Writing"！ There is a new column,which is set up for the students to post English articles.改It is a new column,which is set up改 setting up for the students to post改publish English articles 移到下一段Conecting with others in there,can you omprove you English writing skill. 改By joining in it，can you improve your skills of writing. 加 There are many advantages. 删 In our column,you can ask the teachers for guidance online.In addition,we have prize变复数 for the good writers to encourage others改people to write .There are many things,as phone,for the writers to choice 改is a wide range of choices of prizes such as smart phones.We need the articles of students' life改The articles are required to have an account of daily life.另起第三段Is the prize改Are the prizes prepared for you? Maybe you are "the king in writing" 改文 Welcome to the Column of "English Writing"！It is a new column, setting up for the students to publish English articles There are many advantages.First，you can ask the teachers for guidance online.In addition,we have prizes for the good writers to encourage people to write .There is a wide range of choices of prizes such as smart phones.Moreover，By joining in it，can you improve your skills of writing. Are the prizes prepared for you? Maybe you are "the king in writing" 愿你满意，异议来信。打分20
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下 优点：语义结构合理，叙述有层次 缺点：个别句子需修改，注意用词 Welcome to the Column 加of "English Writing"！ There is a new column,which is set up for the students to post English articles.改It is a new column,which is set up改 setting up for the students to post改publish English articles 移到下一段Conecting with others in there,can you omprove you English writing skill. 改By joining in it，can you improve your skills of writing. 加 There are many advantages. 删 In our column,you can ask the teachers for guidance online.In addition,we have prize变复数 for the good writers to encourage others改people to write .There are many things,as phone,for the writers to choice 改is a wide range of choices of prizes such as smart phones.We need the articles of students' life改The articles are required to have an account of daily life.另起第三段Is the prize改Are the prizes prepared for you? Maybe you are "the king in writing" 改文 Welcome to the Column of "English Writing"！It is a new column, setting up for the students to publish English articles There are many advantages.First，you can ask the teachers for guidance online.In addition,we have prizes for the good writers to encourage people to write .There is a wide range of choices of prizes such as smart phones.Moreover，By joining in it，can you improve your skills of writing. Are the prizes prepared for you? Maybe you are "the king in writing" 愿你满意，异议来信。打分20
最终答案：略