灵鹊做题网2010年英语高考作文
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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. After Lunch, I went to the train station and bought two tickets for them. In the evening, I packed the clothes sun glasses an umbrella and a map into the suitcase. These are the things they need. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 请老师按照高考标准评判，并详细注明扣分原因，谢谢！
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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. After Lunch, I went to the train station and bought two tickets for them. In the evening, I packed the clothes sun glasses， an umbrella and a map into the suitcase. These are the things they need. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 文章写的很好，几乎没有错误，接近范文，给分19分，如果加强练习的话，你有望高考英语作文拿满分哟！祝优秀的你天天快乐！！
最终答案：略
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Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. After Lunch, I went to the train station and bought two tickets for them. In the evening, I packed the clothes sun glasses， an umbrella and a map into the suitcase. These are the things they need. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 文章写的很好，几乎没有错误，接近范文，给分19分，如果加强练习的话，你有望高考英语作文拿满分哟！祝优秀的你天天快乐！！
最终答案：略