灵鹊做题网英语(英语作文评改)
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My cat I am going to describe my cat. My cat is white .It looks like a snwball. She likes sleeping in thesun .she likes eating fish. she al ways playswith me. when I come back from school. She is very lovely and friendly. when I go to school in the morning she always follws me to she gate and shouts ."Meow,meow......"It is the same as saying "good-bye",she likes jumping and she is same as saying"good-bye",she likes jumping and running and is strsng.she can catch mice quickly. I like her very much because shealways makes mehappy. Do you like my cat.
解题思路： 英语作文评改
解题过程：
My cat
I am going to describe my cat. My cat is white .It looks like a snwball(snowball).
She likes sleeping in the sun .she likes eating fish. she al ways plays with me.
when I come back from school.
She is very lovely and friendly. when I go to school in the morning she always
follws me to she(the) gate and shouts(改成screams比较好) ."Meow,meow......"It is the same as saying "good-bye",she likes jumping and she is same as saying"good-bye"(该句重复,应该去掉),she likes jumping and running and is strsng(stong).she can catch mice quickly.
I like her very much because she always makes me happy.
Do you like my cat(?).
这位同学,你这篇英语短文写得很不错.继续努力,相信你能取得更大进步.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My cat
I am going to describe my cat. My cat is white .It looks like a snwball(snowball).
She likes sleeping in the sun .she likes eating fish. she al ways plays with me.
when I come back from school.
She is very lovely and friendly. when I go to school in the morning she always
follws me to she(the) gate and shouts(改成screams比较好) ."Meow,meow......"It is the same as saying "good-bye",she likes jumping and she is same as saying"good-bye"(该句重复,应该去掉),she likes jumping and running and is strsng(stong).she can catch mice quickly.
I like her very much because she always makes me happy.
Do you like my cat(?).
这位同学,你这篇英语短文写得很不错.继续努力,相信你能取得更大进步.
最终答案：略