灵鹊做题网我写了两段给英语老师的离别赠言,帮我检查一下有木有什么错误,最好能完善一下.把修改后的回复过来吧.
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我写了两段给英语老师的离别赠言,帮我检查一下有木有什么错误,最好能完善一下.把修改后的回复过来吧.
这是第一个
Dear sister Beth,
You may never hear we call you sister,but in the mind of everybody in our class,you are more than our teacher; you are our friend,our sister.
One year has flashed by,we sincerely appreciate it that we can share the first year of college life with you.Every fantastic class,every patient help,as well as your charming smile has become part of our diverse college life.
Preparing the final examinations was so busy that we didn’t have a party,didn’t have a dinner together,even didn’t say goodbye.We feel a little pity for that,but wish it just like our friendship,never say goodbye.
We made this PPT as a souvenir for you,it conveys words of our own and best wishes to you.Please keep it in mind,we are friends forevermore.
Yours,
Class 11,Grade 2010
这是第二个
Dear Beth,
One year has flashed by,I really miss the days we are together and they will be the best for memory.Thank you for your taking me to enjoy English.Thank you for your patient and continual help for me.I will try my best and not let you down.
Yours,
Tony 闫青
这是第一个
Dear sister Beth,
You may never hear we call you sister,but in the mind of everybody in our class,you are more than our teacher; you are our friend,our sister.
One year has flashed by,we sincerely appreciate it that we can share the first year of college life with you.Every fantastic class,every patient help,as well as your charming smile has become part of our diverse college life.
Preparing the final examinations was so busy that we didn’t have a party,didn’t have a dinner together,even didn’t say goodbye.We feel a little pity for that,but wish it just like our friendship,never say goodbye.
We made this PPT as a souvenir for you,it conveys words of our own and best wishes to you.Please keep it in mind,we are friends forevermore.
Yours,
Class 11,Grade 2010
这是第二个
Dear Beth,
One year has flashed by,I really miss the days we are together and they will be the best for memory.Thank you for your taking me to enjoy English.Thank you for your patient and continual help for me.I will try my best and not let you down.
Yours,
Tony 闫青
第二个的称呼比较地道.第一个除了不地道,还没看出什么错误
第二个中taking me to enjoy English,不地道吧? your patient ,应该是your patience.
help for me, for me可以不要么? 汉字改写为拼音吧.
再问： your patient是修饰后面help的形容词，对吧？ 第一个称呼Dear sister Beth改成什么比较合适呢？ 谢谢
第二个中taking me to enjoy English,不地道吧? your patient ,应该是your patience.
help for me, for me可以不要么? 汉字改写为拼音吧.
再问： your patient是修饰后面help的形容词，对吧？ 第一个称呼Dear sister Beth改成什么比较合适呢？ 谢谢
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