英语翻译麻烦修改下吧。英文。弄在一一行

英语翻译
麻烦修改下吧。
英文。弄在一一行

Carry on till tomorrow
坚持到明天
In younger days,I told myself my life would be my own
在年轻的日子里,我告诉自己我将有属于自己的生活
And I'd leave the place where sunshine never shone
而且我要离开这阳光照不到的地方
For my life's too short for waiting when I see the rising sun
我的生命没有时间等待,当我看见升起的太阳那时
Then I know again that I must carry on
它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去
Carry on till tomorow,there's no reason to look back
坚持到明天,那是没有理由再回想
Carry on,carry on,carry on
坚持到明天……
Beyond the shadows of the clouds and onward to the sky
在远处云层的黑影前进到天空
Carry on till I find the rainbow's end
让它坚持到我找到彩虹的尽头
For my life's too short for waiting when I see the rising sun
我的生命没有时间等待,当我看见升起的太阳那时
Then I know again that I must carry on
它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去
Carry on till tomorow,there's no reason to look back
坚持到明天,那是没有理由再回想
Carry on,carry on,carry on
坚持到明天……坚持到明天……坚持到明天……
Drifting on the wings of freedom,leave this stormy day
飘浮在自由的云上,离开那些日子
And we'll ride to tomorrow's golden fields
而且会飘浮到明日金色的田野上
For my life's too short for waiting when I see the rising sun
我的生命没有时间等待,当我看见升起的太阳那时
Then I know again that I must carry on
它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去
Carry on till tomorow,there's no reason to look back
坚持到明天,那是没有理由再回想
Carry on,carry on,carry on
坚持到明天……坚持到明天……坚持到明天……
And when the heavy journey's done,I'll rest my weary head
当着沉重的旅行结束,我将休息我疲惫的头脑
For the world and it's colours will be mine
那是为了这个世界更加光明
For my life's too short for waiting when I see the setting sun
我的生命没有时间等待,当我看见升起的太阳那时
Then I know again that I must carry on
它又一次告诉我必须坚持下去
Carry on till tomorow,there's no reason to look back
坚持到明天,那是没有理由再回想
Carry on,carry on,carry on
坚持到明天……坚持到明天……坚持到明天……