灵鹊做题网谁给看一下这个英语句子哪里有错误,如何改正,
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谁给看一下这个英语句子哪里有错误,如何改正,
Twilight gradually merged into darkness.And those what I think about in my heart changed into the dim light in the distance as well.I cann't make out what they are.What I can do is merely to see the scenery which I cherish fade away.
The wind is rising,it is so gentle that remind me of those bright smile which I would never,ever forget.
Twilight gradually merged into darkness.And those what I think about in my heart changed into the dim light in the distance as well.I cann't make out what they are.What I can do is merely to see the scenery which I cherish fade away.
The wind is rising,it is so gentle that remind me of those bright smile which I would never,ever forget.
暮光渐渐融入黑暗.那些萦绕在我心中的也消失在朦胧的远处.我,甚至不清楚他们是什么,只有静默地望着这些让我惊奇的景象慢慢消散.
起风了,轻柔的风令我想起他们的微笑,而那,是我永远,永远也不会忘记的.
1:those what i think.what从句前面不需要先行词的,所以去掉those好了.
2：merely 最好放在to后面
3：so gentle that it reminds me...
4：smile 应该用复数形式 smiles
是“暮光之城”里的吧,好想看,但一直没机会.
起风了,轻柔的风令我想起他们的微笑,而那,是我永远,永远也不会忘记的.
1:those what i think.what从句前面不需要先行词的,所以去掉those好了.
2：merely 最好放在to后面
3：so gentle that it reminds me...
4：smile 应该用复数形式 smiles
是“暮光之城”里的吧,好想看,但一直没机会.