灵鹊做题网哪个高手能帮我看一下这个英文句子,看有木有问题,或是有点“中文式”英语?
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哪个高手能帮我看一下这个英文句子,看有木有问题,或是有点“中文式”英语?
Now,everyone wants to be successful,but it’s true that not all people’s dreams can come true,just one kind of people,who work really hard and never give up anything,can achieve their dreams.
Now,everyone wants to be successful,but it’s true that not all people’s dreams can come true,just one kind of people,who work really hard and never give up anything,can achieve their dreams.
现在,每个人都想成为一个成功的,不过这是千真万确的,不是所有人的梦想可以成真,只是一种人,他们非常非常努力,永不放弃任何东西,可以实现他们的梦想.
这是用你的句式翻译出来的,是不是有一点不顺.
Now,everyone wants to succeed.Of course,we have to admit that not all dreams can come true.Only those who work very hard and those who have never give up can realize their dreams.
现在,每个人都想获得成功.当然,我们必须承认,不是所有的梦想都能成真.只有那些非常努力的和那些从未放弃能够实现他们的梦想.
是不是好很多,want to do sth.不加be动词,用but中文式口语化很严重,其实老外在一句话的开头表转折是更常用的是howover,of course.后面句式没有问题但是表达上不够准确.希望对你有所帮助.
这是用你的句式翻译出来的,是不是有一点不顺.
Now,everyone wants to succeed.Of course,we have to admit that not all dreams can come true.Only those who work very hard and those who have never give up can realize their dreams.
现在,每个人都想获得成功.当然,我们必须承认,不是所有的梦想都能成真.只有那些非常努力的和那些从未放弃能够实现他们的梦想.
是不是好很多,want to do sth.不加be动词,用but中文式口语化很严重,其实老外在一句话的开头表转折是更常用的是howover,of course.后面句式没有问题但是表达上不够准确.希望对你有所帮助.