灵鹊做题网帮我改下作文
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帮我改改用法不对的地方，谢谢 A few feelings about replaying PaoPao For a few reason, I played PaoPao at a special occasion today. The new opening music and screen make me feel like a stranger .Then it turns to the first page. After changing the role and color, there is my new image at the uper left corner . No ballons ,no pet, no ashes-prevent-glasses. Just a girl in blue who sits in a blue board-car. The score is zero,the gold-coin is zero, the game-coin is also zero. Even more, I do not have the drive’s license. The whole thing was caused because I forget my old user’s password. And if I want to ask for my password, it will be as hard as looking for a niddle in the sea. Although it’s just a game, this unfortunate thing tells me to remember all code in both virtual reality and the real world. I have heard what we’ll do if we forget the code of the bank-code at the politics class. You may spend your money or time to get back the code. But they are not the best way, especially at the emerency time. The best way is to never forget the code.
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解题过程：
A few feelings about replaying PaoPao For a few reason(s), I played PaoPao at a special occasion today. The new opening music and screen make me feel like a stranger .Then it turns to the first page. After changing the role and color, there is my new image at the uper left corner . No ballons ,no pet, no ashes-prevent-glasses. Just a girl in blue who sits in a blue board-car. The score is zero,the gold-coin is zero, the game-coin is also zero. Even more, I do not have the drive(r)’s license. The whole thing was caused because I forget (forgot)my old user’s password. And if I want to ask for my password, it will be as hard as looking for a niddle in the sea. Although it’s just a game, this unfortunate thing tells me to remember all code in both virtual reality (去掉）and the real world. I have heard what we’ll do if we forget the code of the bank-code at the politics（political) class. You may spend your money or time to get back(in getting back） the code. But they are not the best way, especially at the emerency time. The best way is to never（never to ) forget the code. 写得不错， 只是有个别小错误要注意。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
A few feelings about replaying PaoPao For a few reason(s), I played PaoPao at a special occasion today. The new opening music and screen make me feel like a stranger .Then it turns to the first page. After changing the role and color, there is my new image at the uper left corner . No ballons ,no pet, no ashes-prevent-glasses. Just a girl in blue who sits in a blue board-car. The score is zero,the gold-coin is zero, the game-coin is also zero. Even more, I do not have the drive(r)’s license. The whole thing was caused because I forget (forgot)my old user’s password. And if I want to ask for my password, it will be as hard as looking for a niddle in the sea. Although it’s just a game, this unfortunate thing tells me to remember all code in both virtual reality (去掉）and the real world. I have heard what we’ll do if we forget the code of the bank-code at the politics（political) class. You may spend your money or time to get back(in getting back） the code. But they are not the best way, especially at the emerency time. The best way is to never（never to ) forget the code. 写得不错， 只是有个别小错误要注意。
最终答案：略