要参加小学生（四年级）英语作文比赛.老师要求准备几篇短文.内容可以是,在公园里玩,快乐的一天等等..

要参加小学生（四年级）英语作文比赛.老师要求准备几篇短文.内容可以是,在公园里玩,快乐的一天等等..

A riot of colours in the childhood, there is a happy day, sad day, a day, a bad day, have a happy day ... ...
That day is the first day of the new year. Sunny, cloudless. I and the daddy, mother, cousin and I drove all the way up to the Kowloon amusement park.
Along the way, I think it seems more blue, white clouds are like more than before, the flowers and grasses are and I nod and smile, everything is so beautiful.
It lasted an hour, we came to Kowloon Park gate. The park, we like a happy bird, and jumping
Happy bird, jumping. Dad went to buy tickets, as we play people entered the park gate.
I saw the crowd to a hold to. I and cousin also follow the past. Ah, what a huge monster! I asked, to know the pleasure toy called the big wheel, like a flat small house in turning gently. We sat up. I looked through the sides of the glass window down, Kowloon Park panorama panoramic view. The fun is really beyond count: a KEF" Mermaid", have fun and excitement" advance through the rapids", a terrible thrills "terrorist holiday" ... ...
With the ferris wheel is elevated, the scene is more and more small. When we sit in the ferris wheel to the highest point or time, the scene suddenly overwhelmed me: a road like a colorful ribbon winding interlocked together, bumper cars like a bug in the slowly crawling ... ... I can feel fresh. Suddenly, a large tram is lower, the scene is back to normal. With the ringing bell, we have a Ferris wheel.
Walked along the path, we come to the " roller coaster". I saw tanks like the car to rely on their own inertia, quickly through a ring rail. I said to my father:" Daddy, play the good?" " Okay," Dad said with a smile. So we bought a ticket, a trolley.
A after the bell sounded, the car will start. For a start, it slowly to ramp up. Suddenly, the car started shaking, will begin to slide. My heart is with the vibration, as on the string arrow tense, hands clasped hands. Just listen to the" rumble " sound, the roller coaster suddenly turned a right angle bend, flying to the following track slide up. I keep my head down, eyes only by rail rather than rapid, could not help heart" thump" jumped up. "Boom!" The roller coaster at most make people tremble with fear in one's boots. Here the track some tilt, when the pulley in turning suddenly with the inclined track charging time, I scared the stigmata, closed eyes. I think, this time, I had to fall head broken and bleeding may not! Did not think of roller coaster but deftly took a turn, and continue to another circle orbit. My heart seems to place a heavy stone, slowly calmed down. The roller coaster, I threw herself into my arms, and said: "Daddy, it was a daring attempt!"
The sun's going down, we will be reluctant to part to take the car, looked out of the window, days are blue, the cloud is so white, a wild profusion of vegetation on both sides of the street trees say good-bye, I think back to Kowloon amusement park that look attractive, charming scene, excited mood for a long time to calm down ... ...
This day is a happy day!
小盆友,↓次要给打过过分哦,否则——后果自负
再问： 有木有短点的..这个貌似太长了...