灵鹊做题网求大神修改其中的语法与逻辑错误
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求大神修改其中的语法与逻辑错误
I am the only child of my family
I am the only child of my family.My parents always put their attention to me.They develop themselves to me.But I often feel envy when my father told me about the story of their brothers.When they were children,they always play together.I look forward to having some brothers.Although I have to share my room and parents’ love with them,I will feel really happy.I have lots of candies,but I don’t have a people to share with.Of cause I have friends and classmates,but they are different.I hope that I have a brother who I grew up with.The relationship between he and I will be inseparable.But those are dream.I am the only child of my family.
I am the only child of my family
I am the only child of my family.My parents always put their attention to me.They develop themselves to me.But I often feel envy when my father told me about the story of their brothers.When they were children,they always play together.I look forward to having some brothers.Although I have to share my room and parents’ love with them,I will feel really happy.I have lots of candies,but I don’t have a people to share with.Of cause I have friends and classmates,but they are different.I hope that I have a brother who I grew up with.The relationship between he and I will be inseparable.But those are dream.I am the only child of my family.
They develop themselves to me.建议换一句,没看懂.
feel后面应该加形容词envious
When they were children,they always play together.时间上是过去时,应用played
parents’ love 换成the love of my parents 会更好点吧
but I don’t have a people to share with--But no one to share with me
I hope that I will have ;who--whom; can grow up with
those--these
个人建议,仅供参考,文章内容写得很好啊
feel后面应该加形容词envious
When they were children,they always play together.时间上是过去时,应用played
parents’ love 换成the love of my parents 会更好点吧
but I don’t have a people to share with--But no one to share with me
I hope that I will have ;who--whom; can grow up with
those--these
个人建议,仅供参考,文章内容写得很好啊
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