请英语老师帮我看一下 这两篇文章有没有语法错误

请英语老师帮我看一下 这两篇文章有没有语法错误
文章一
There is a widespread concern over the issue that________（作文题目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.(开头一般题目给出) The majority think that________（观点一）.First of all,________（原因一）.Furthermore,________（原因二）.So it goes without saying that________（观点一）.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the view that________（观点二）.On the one hand,________（原因一）.On the other hand,________（原因二）.Therefore,there is no doubt that ________（观点二） As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ________(原因一),but also because ________.（原因二）It's high time that________.(喊口号) Only in this way eventually can we ________（支持这一观点的结果）
文章二
In recent days,we have to face a problem________A,which ,surprisingly ,is becoming more and more serious.First of all,________(说明A的现状)．Secondly,________(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,________(解决方法一).For another,________(解决方法二).Finally,________解决方法三).Personally,I believe that ________(我的解决方法).Consequently,I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的好处).

没有错啦 真的 文章结构不错 但是 感觉就像一个套 心理觉得照这样写,不好吧
作文主要还是自己表达的观点 不可能每一个话题都能用着个套吧.要更注意 高级 短语 词汇 从句