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谁帮我改改我的这段作文?
People should be patient enough to deal with something in some cases.Especially when people face some really tough problems,it is better to spend much time to think over it.For example,when a student choose a major related to his or her future; when the people confront some conflict with their friends or relatives; when some investors to invest a huge amounts of money to a project,the patience is necessary.
后面的一堆when 我知道有问题.但我想写牛逼的排比.谁帮我改改.
谁帮我改改我的这段作文?
People should be patient enough to deal with something in some cases.Especially when people face some really tough problems,it is better to spend much time (in) thinking over it.For example,when choosing a major related to his or her future,or confronting some conflict with their friends or relatives,or investing a huge amount of money to a project,patience is necessary.
spend time (in) doing sth是个固定搭配,后面只能跟doing,其同意短语为take time to do sth.
而排比句中所列举的各种情况的主语student,people和investor则可以省去,直接用现在分词短语作状语.