灵鹊做题网帮我改正下英语一级作文
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帮我改正下英语一级作文
情景：昨天是小红16岁的生日,她开了个晚会,邀请我们大家参加.请用英语写一篇50字的作文,描述小红的生日晚会.内容具体如下：
1.小红在昨晚8点开了个16岁的生日晚会.
2.她的同学和朋友都参加了生日晚会
3.她父母为大家准备了丰盛的饭菜,我们给她送了礼物
4.她很愉快,我们也很开心.
我写的如下：
xiaohong is sixteen years old ,yesterday was her brithday,he had big party,start in 8'o clock she intived classmate and good friends .she parents is prapare delicious food for us .We have present a gift to her .
She was very happy,we were happy too!
情景：昨天是小红16岁的生日,她开了个晚会,邀请我们大家参加.请用英语写一篇50字的作文,描述小红的生日晚会.内容具体如下：
1.小红在昨晚8点开了个16岁的生日晚会.
2.她的同学和朋友都参加了生日晚会
3.她父母为大家准备了丰盛的饭菜,我们给她送了礼物
4.她很愉快,我们也很开心.
我写的如下：
xiaohong is sixteen years old ,yesterday was her brithday,he had big party,start in 8'o clock she intived classmate and good friends .she parents is prapare delicious food for us .We have present a gift to her .
She was very happy,we were happy too!
,yesterday was her brithday he had big party改为Her birthday was on yesterday and she had a big party .
start in 8'o clock改为The party started at 8'oclock
she intived classmate and good friends 改为She invited her classmates and good friends.
she parents is prapare delicious food for us 改为Her parents prapared delicious food for us.
.We have present a gift to her 改为We presented a gift to her.
start in 8'o clock改为The party started at 8'oclock
she intived classmate and good friends 改为She invited her classmates and good friends.
she parents is prapare delicious food for us 改为Her parents prapared delicious food for us.
.We have present a gift to her 改为We presented a gift to her.