灵鹊做题网[求助]关于一段《我的背包》的英语作文.
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[求助]关于一段《我的背包》的英语作文.
I have a black backpack.I bought it inNew York City this spring break on my birthday.My backpack is big and black,and it is a famous brand- North Face.This is my favorite brand.It does notget spoiled by water because it is waterproof.It is can also endure dirty.Ican put a smart mac computer and ipad with many books.It is very “hand-working”because I keep all my school things in it.It is very heavy.It is with me allthe time.During school days,and it is a good friend of mine.
以上的一段话不是写的不是很好,能否帮忙修改得漂亮一些?
I have a black backpack.I bought it inNew York City this spring break on my birthday.My backpack is big and black,and it is a famous brand- North Face.This is my favorite brand.It does notget spoiled by water because it is waterproof.It is can also endure dirty.Ican put a smart mac computer and ipad with many books.It is very “hand-working”because I keep all my school things in it.It is very heavy.It is with me allthe time.During school days,and it is a good friend of mine.
以上的一段话不是写的不是很好,能否帮忙修改得漂亮一些?
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I have a backpack.
I bought it when I was in New York City this spring as a birthday gift to myself.It is rather big and it's black in colour.What I really like about the bag is that it is from my favorite brand,North face,
It is very durable because it is waterproof,and since it's black,it is not as easily dirtied as the other bags of ligher shades.
It can hold a mac laptop and ipad,along with many books.I usually use it for school,which explains why is it with me all the time,as well as the fact that it is extremely heavy!It truly is a great companion and good friend of mine during my schooling days.
I bought it when I was in New York City this spring as a birthday gift to myself.It is rather big and it's black in colour.What I really like about the bag is that it is from my favorite brand,North face,
It is very durable because it is waterproof,and since it's black,it is not as easily dirtied as the other bags of ligher shades.
It can hold a mac laptop and ipad,along with many books.I usually use it for school,which explains why is it with me all the time,as well as the fact that it is extremely heavy!It truly is a great companion and good friend of mine during my schooling days.