灵鹊做题网求修改,help me
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求修改,help me
Hello,everyone.I`am a salesman.Everyday,I help people to choose their favorite clothes and I like to talk with them.
Yesterday,a foriegn came to our shop.He is tall and looks very handsome.SO I breavely forward talk with him in Chinese.
But i am wrong.He doesn`t know what I say .Just smiled then left .I looked at him high figure left..I hope I can say "Welcome
to China" next time.I think I must be improve my English and talk with them in one day .By that time I can help them to find
their favorate clothes
Hello,everyone.I`am a salesman.Everyday,I help people to choose their favorite clothes and I like to talk with them.
Yesterday,a foriegn came to our shop.He is tall and looks very handsome.SO I breavely forward talk with him in Chinese.
But i am wrong.He doesn`t know what I say .Just smiled then left .I looked at him high figure left..I hope I can say "Welcome
to China" next time.I think I must be improve my English and talk with them in one day .By that time I can help them to find
their favorate clothes
Hello,everyone.I`am a salesman.Everyday,I help people to choose their favorite clothes and I like to talk with them.
Yesterday,a foriegn (应该是foreigner) came to our shop.He is (was好一点) tall and looks （looked） very handsome.SO I breavely （加一个headed） forward to talk with him in Chinese.
But i am （was 后面的也是呀 都要用过去式..） wrong.He doesn`t （ didn‘t）know what I say .（he）Just smiled then left .I looked at him high figure left..（这句不是很懂要表达什么意思..） I hope I can say "Welcome
to China" next time.I think I must be (不需要be 可去掉) improve my English and talk with them in （这里in可以去掉） one day .By that time I can help them to find
their favorate clothes
Yesterday,a foriegn (应该是foreigner) came to our shop.He is (was好一点) tall and looks （looked） very handsome.SO I breavely （加一个headed） forward to talk with him in Chinese.
But i am （was 后面的也是呀 都要用过去式..） wrong.He doesn`t （ didn‘t）know what I say .（he）Just smiled then left .I looked at him high figure left..（这句不是很懂要表达什么意思..） I hope I can say "Welcome
to China" next time.I think I must be (不需要be 可去掉) improve my English and talk with them in （这里in可以去掉） one day .By that time I can help them to find
their favorate clothes