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帮我看一下哪里有错误,请帮我改正,谢谢

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帮我看一下哪里有错误,请帮我改正,谢谢
中文:好多年不见了,你变了好多,我知道你现在已经有男朋友了,但我只想告诉你我喜欢你
So many years, I think you have changed a lot/so much(这里用哪个比较好呢?). I know you already have a boyfriend, but I just want to tell you that I like you.
帮我看一下哪里有错误,请帮我改正,谢谢
1.好多年不见:
最常用的:long time no see(又像熟人打招呼).
2.此段用了太多 I ,显得多余重复.先少一个吧
maybe you have changed a lot , I know you have a boyfriend(如果用already就需用过去式), but I just want to tell you that I like you.(如果你真是想表达爱意,就去掉like,用love,大胆地去爱吧)