灵鹊做题网下面这两段话有错误么?
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下面这两段话有错误么?
It's the first time I send a postcard to you,so I'm a little nervous.I hope you like it.I always think it's very lucky to meet you.You gave me a lot of good memories in my life,and even more exciting..I have to say you are a very interesting person.It's always full of laughter with your.It's very nice to meet you.和It's the first time for me to send you a postcard which makes a little bit nervous.Wish you'll like it.I always feel so lucky to know you.You give me lots of beautiful memories.My life is also getting more brilliant because of you.I had to say that you are a fun person.It's filled with laughter being with you.So glad to know you.
It's the first time I send a postcard to you,so I'm a little nervous.I hope you like it.I always think it's very lucky to meet you.You gave me a lot of good memories in my life,and even more exciting..I have to say you are a very interesting person.It's always full of laughter with your.It's very nice to meet you.和It's the first time for me to send you a postcard which makes a little bit nervous.Wish you'll like it.I always feel so lucky to know you.You give me lots of beautiful memories.My life is also getting more brilliant because of you.I had to say that you are a fun person.It's filled with laughter being with you.So glad to know you.
have to换掉,用别的代替,have to有点勉强的意思.然后a lot of laughter里面的laughter换成humorous比较好,你原来用的有点讽刺意味.