灵鹊做题网我写了一篇题目为summer vacation的作文,希望我有错误的地方你们帮忙改正.过去式哦.
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我写了一篇题目为summer vacation的作文,希望我有错误的地方你们帮忙改正.过去式哦.
In summer vacation,I went back to my hometown,I'm very excited.On July 28,mom and dad with me on a plane back to my hometown,Sichuan province.
In my hometown,I saw the long time no see aunt,grandma,grandpa.I’m very happy.
In hometown I special relax,for a moment to playing computer,for a moment to play with my aunt,for a moment to wrote my homework.
One day,I dragged my aunt go to the park to play ,Into the park,the front have a lot of people,around a stage .Walk up to a see,was someone in the dance performance,It shows excellent,everyone clapped their hands,and I have no exception.
One day,mom and dad with me went Qingcheng Mountain.The place was very quiet and cool.I saw some monkeys,I feeding monkeys foods.Very cute and lovely.
Let me very happy this summer,also learn a lot,the upcoming junior high school life,I will work hard!
In summer vacation,I went back to my hometown,I'm very excited.On July 28,mom and dad with me on a plane back to my hometown,Sichuan province.
In my hometown,I saw the long time no see aunt,grandma,grandpa.I’m very happy.
In hometown I special relax,for a moment to playing computer,for a moment to play with my aunt,for a moment to wrote my homework.
One day,I dragged my aunt go to the park to play ,Into the park,the front have a lot of people,around a stage .Walk up to a see,was someone in the dance performance,It shows excellent,everyone clapped their hands,and I have no exception.
One day,mom and dad with me went Qingcheng Mountain.The place was very quiet and cool.I saw some monkeys,I feeding monkeys foods.Very cute and lovely.
Let me very happy this summer,also learn a lot,the upcoming junior high school life,I will work hard!
我看了一下你的文章,做了一些改动.你可以根据你自己的情况改一下.ps：have a nice summer vocation~On July 28,my parents and I.went back to our hometown,Sichuan province,by plane,which made me very excited,...
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