灵鹊做题网这篇文章有哪几处是不对的,
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这篇文章有哪几处是不对的,
Hello everyone!I'm very gland to stand here to you for my introduction.My
English name is Angel.Lots people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a
cheerful gril.I I always bring happiness to people a found me.
I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future.
Next,I will sing an English song,its name is “ you are my sunshine”.
Hello everyone!I'm very gland to stand here to you for my introduction.My
English name is Angel.Lots people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a
cheerful gril.I I always bring happiness to people a found me.
I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future.
Next,I will sing an English song,its name is “ you are my sunshine”.
明显 你的是自我介绍 但是 第2句 就很有问题 gland 就拼错了 应该是glad 还有 "stand here to you for my introduction" 根本没有这种说法 你可以这样说 stand here to introuction myself . 还有 Lots people 中间少了个 of 应该是 lots of people. 还有 还有 第3行结尾 a found me 是什么意思 是around me 吧 最后一句 song 的后面的逗号要么改成句号 要么 用定语从句 改成 I will sing an English song, of which name is “ you are my sunshine”.
再问： Hello everyone!I'm very glad to stand here to you for my introduction .My English name is Angel.Lots of people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a cheerful gril.I always bring happiness to people afound me. I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future.Next, I will sing, an English song, its name is “ you are my sunshine”. （这样子ok吗
再答： 你根本没仔细看我写的的回答啊 很多地方都没改 你是小学生还是中学生？ 仔细看看我提出的地方 附上我帮你改过的 Hello everyone!I'm very glad to stand here to introuction myself .My English name is Angel.Lots of people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a cheerful gril.I I always bring happiness to people around me. I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future. Next, I will sing an English song, of which name is “ you are my sunshine”.
再问： 中学生
再问： Hello everyone!I'm very glad to stand here to you for my introduction .My English name is Angel.Lots of people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a cheerful gril.I always bring happiness to people afound me. I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future.Next, I will sing, an English song, its name is “ you are my sunshine”. （这样子ok吗
再答： 你根本没仔细看我写的的回答啊 很多地方都没改 你是小学生还是中学生？ 仔细看看我提出的地方 附上我帮你改过的 Hello everyone!I'm very glad to stand here to introuction myself .My English name is Angel.Lots of people say I'm just an Angel.Maybe because I'm a cheerful gril.I I always bring happiness to people around me. I'm crazy about English.I want to be an English teacher in the future. Next, I will sing an English song, of which name is “ you are my sunshine”.
再问： 中学生