英语短文的修改下列短文存在哪些语法词法问题,请指出并修改,Girl,maybe you should go with m

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英语短文的修改
下列短文存在哪些语法词法问题,请指出并修改,
Girl,maybe you should go with me
In front of us it's paradise
Girl,don't trouble the other things
The new world is waiting for us
Give me your hand
You'll feeling safe and no one would hamper it
Believe me,my girl
The future we have is beautiful
Believe me,my girl
Don't hesitate any more
Yesterday,we came across in the street
Your first sight made me miss myself
Today,you are all for me
Life without you I couldn't breathe
Tomorrow,will be a better day
Cause I love you,you love me

Girl,maybe you should go with me
In front of us it's paradise (of后加 ,）
Girl,don't trouble the other things（中国英语,bother the rest)
The new world is waiting for us
Give me your hand (hands)
You'll feeling safe and no one would hamper it (feel,"on one would hamper"中式英文）
Believe me,my girl （还是中国英文人的话用,trust)
The future we have is beautiful
Believe me,my girl
Don't hesitate any more
Yesterday,we came across in the street
Your first sight made me miss myself 第一印象是1st image 丢失自我,是lost myself
Today,you are all for me
Life without you I couldn't breathe ,you后面加分号
Tomorrow,will be a better day
Cause I love you,you love me 诗歌没这么俗的 cause we would have fallen in love.都比你那好多了
我只是稍微改掉点必须改掉的错误,如果要次文章达到诗歌的标准,需大改动

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