10个地方错.也可能多出10个,

10个地方错.也可能多出10个,
English is also spoken as a foreign or second language in South Asia,India have a very large number of English speaker This is because Britain ruled India from 1765 and 1947,During that time,English becomes the language for government and education English is also spoken in many others countries of Africa and Asia,such as south Africa,singapore and Malaysia In the china,English has used in Hong Kong since aboat 1842,Today the nuomber of people learning English are increasing rapid.
Will chinese English becomes one of the world Englishes?Only time will tell.
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English is also spoken as a foreign or second language in South Asia,(.)India have(has) a very large number of English speaker(s.) This is because Britain ruled India from 1765 and(to) 1947,(.)During that time,English becomes(became) the language for(of) government and education (.)English is also spoken in many others(other) countries of Africa and Asia,such as south Africa,singapore and Malaysia(.) In the(不要the) china(China),English has (been) used in Hong Kong since aboat 1842,(.)Today the nuomber(number) of people learning English are(is) increasing rapid(rapidly).Will chinese English becomes(become) one of the world Englishes?Only time will tell.(.)
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English is also spoken as a foreign or second language in South Asia.India has a very large number of English speakers.This is because Britain ruled India from 1765 to 1947.During that time,English became the language of government and education.English is also spoken in many other countries of Africa and Asia,such as south Africa,singapore and Malaysia.In China,English has been used in Hong Kong since aboat 1842.Today the number of people learning English is increasing rapidly.Will Chinese English become one of the world Englishes?Only time will tell.
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