灵鹊做题网英语短文改错,外加一篇英语作文
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英语短文改错,外加一篇英语作文
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My name is LiHua,Recently,our teacher ask us to conduct a survey on psychology .The result reveals that most of students fail to be confident,I do think the reasons are as follows;
First of all,communicating plays a crucial role in promoting understanding,but the fact is students do not like to communicate with their classmates,they do everying by themselves,and then their parents put more pressure on students,students are required to focus their attention on study,they have little time to play with friends,thus ,they will have asense of lonely.finaly,on the part of scjool,there are many inappropriate ways to evaluate students'performance.
From my perspective,what we need to do is to try our best to change our thoughts,Not evething is OK in one's life,so friends are people who can help us ,we can share our thoughts,feelings and emotions with friends,and parents should be realistic rather than expect too much ,they should learn to encourage their children occationally,besides ,school should find a more useful way to evaluate students.
we 改为they
more去掉
late改为later
teacher前加the
how改为what
My name is LiHua,Recently,our teacher ask us to conduct a survey on psychology .The result reveals that most of students fail to be confident,I do think the reasons are as follows;
First of all,communicating plays a crucial role in promoting understanding,but the fact is students do not like to communicate with their classmates,they do everying by themselves,and then their parents put more pressure on students,students are required to focus their attention on study,they have little time to play with friends,thus ,they will have asense of lonely.finaly,on the part of scjool,there are many inappropriate ways to evaluate students'performance.
From my perspective,what we need to do is to try our best to change our thoughts,Not evething is OK in one's life,so friends are people who can help us ,we can share our thoughts,feelings and emotions with friends,and parents should be realistic rather than expect too much ,they should learn to encourage their children occationally,besides ,school should find a more useful way to evaluate students.