灵鹊做题网请英语高手帮我看一下作文 哪里有问题,虚心求教
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请英语高手帮我看一下作文 哪里有问题,虚心求教
这是别人帮我修改过得,但英语不好也看不太懂,请帮忙再仔细检查一下,
I appreciate my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all the good things for me.Parents have tried all they can do to help me grow.
We should treat our parents with a sincere and grateful heart to go with our parents,but not take for granted that parents do everything to help us since they took us to this beautiful world and this is great enough,however ,our parents ask us for nothing.We have to pay for silence and stop continuously demanding their pay,be thankful for it,repay our parents bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,because I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever
这是别人帮我修改过得,但英语不好也看不太懂,请帮忙再仔细检查一下,
I appreciate my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all the good things for me.Parents have tried all they can do to help me grow.
We should treat our parents with a sincere and grateful heart to go with our parents,but not take for granted that parents do everything to help us since they took us to this beautiful world and this is great enough,however ,our parents ask us for nothing.We have to pay for silence and stop continuously demanding their pay,be thankful for it,repay our parents bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,because I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever
.They're so diligent because they keep on working all day to make a living.What more,they're so selfless who always give all the good things for me.Parents always do their best to help us grow up healthily and happily .
第二段开头前几句有点一头雾水.We have to listen to them without saying any angry words and stop continuously demanding their pay.You should be thankful for them and repay them bit by bit.
If I am happy,they would share my happiness with me.I love my parents greatly because they are the ones who love me best and they gave me life.
I will try my best to return my parents because I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever.
第二段开头前几句有点一头雾水.We have to listen to them without saying any angry words and stop continuously demanding their pay.You should be thankful for them and repay them bit by bit.
If I am happy,they would share my happiness with me.I love my parents greatly because they are the ones who love me best and they gave me life.
I will try my best to return my parents because I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever.